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February 17, 2009
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I can feel his eyes watching me across the room,
it's a crowded place but his slick presence can't be ignored,
he moves slowly as a lazy cat but with firm steps,
but I pretend I don't see him,
though he has caught my mind since the moment he appeared in the party,
there is something from him that steals my mind,
I can listen his voice calling me despite he has never talked to me...
and suddenly he is in front of me,
smiling as he offers me his hand leading me to the dance floor,
sweeping me from head to toe with his mystery,
we dance under the stars...
his fragance seduces my senses,
undoing my strength as he whispers sweet words to my ear
and his hand slides along my back and my hips,
as I sway under the cadence of his body,
leaving no space between us,my breasts crashing against his chest,
he takes my breath away as his lips kiss mine,
a wild kiss that makes my whole body tremble as he bites my tongue
and the blood flows tasting like wine...
he traces a path of dark kisses sliding his lips down my neck,
and I lose myself completely under his embrace...   
:iconvillenueve:
OMG...sorry,I can' stop my love for vampires...I dream with them 24/7!

A small poem about dancing with a vampire...
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:iconvanessaholly:
Reminds me of Blood +. Great show to watch if you really like vampires.
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:icontariencole:
Mood: Wow! *TarienCole Dec 24, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Baron Camuel approves...and awaits the Feast to come! :P

Lovely, and happy birthday too :)
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:icontabitha-ravenshade:
hmm... i wonder what the other people at the party are thinking.

very well done. although did you know you have this under prose
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:iconhussygirlfreak:
Yes, this is REAL vampireness not sparkling Edward/Bella vamps that do nothing but mope together.
VAMPIRE ARE DARK AND PASSIONATE PEOPLE!
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:iconwhippoorwillheretic:
Very beautifully written with dark passion. Perfect.
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:iconsailorangelz:
~SailorAngelz Jan 25, 2010  Student Writer
there's nothing wrong with locing a vampire...and i too,like vampires.. ^^
lol love the poem
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:icondr7key:
Amazing, i just cannot stop loving vampires too :D
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:iconsobaku-no-sarah:
beautiful. i know i can't forget the dream i had with a vamp in it ^^;
to me, dreams are more important than vampires, but it's true that vampires have that alluring dark nature. bela lugosi ftw.
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:iconppp-pokerface:
This is beautiful! It really captured essence! On the other hand, looking at your comments, you like vampires...you are not alone! :hug:
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:iconedward2061901:
wow ur a good writer so much emotion in so little words just wow ima read ur other stuff ")
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